Wednesday, 22 February 2017

               swimming in the morning 
I see the water sploshing over the sides as I stand at 
the end. I am ready to take the plunge. I hear kids 
screaming because the water is freezing. They're talking
together with chatting teeth. I feel drops of water 
splashing onto my skin. I feel like an ice cube as 
I dive into the water.   Image result for pool

1 comment:

  1. Kia ora Gabriel
    Good job on this post. You've added some detail to make it more interesting to your reader too. Well done!